Wednesday 28 October 2015

Mixed Up Stories

We all started with a piece of paper and a pencil. After writing the word the teacher said, or a word from a list, e.g. people, places adjectives (describing words) or verbs, we had to roll our paper down before passing our paper to the person on our left. They then had to add a word, the pages went round in a circle until the story was finished.

Here our our stories.

The pretty and tall sister skipped in to the haunted bush because she was happy and excited.

The short fat  old sister rode a bike into KFC because she was hot and starving.

The rich cool niece ran into KFC because she was mad.

The pretty and rich nephew rode into the pool because he was hot and silly.

The pretty fast mum ran into the new McDonalds  because she was hungry and hot.

The handsome Dad ran to the house because he was happy and skinny

The cool and old nan ran in the park because it was green, she was hot and thirsty.

The cool and old Mum drove to the old KFC because she was sad and mad.

The small and cool Mum walked in to KFC because she was happy and hot.

The smelly and fat old man sprinted into the old KFC because he was hurt.

The small and fast cousin tie dyed her shorts, then went to KFC because she was happy.

The pretty and fast cousin crawled in to the Zoo because she was hurt.

The tall skinny old mum tie dyed her hair in the pools because she was scared and sad.

The handsome Mum tie dyed her t shirt in the pool because she was sad and excited.

The poor brother ran in to the haunted cave because he was old and sad.


They were great, as they helped us. We could talk about rereading and checking our stories and fixing up mistakes like, she/he.



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