After our last writing sample, I notice the attempts to include speech. We looked at how it would look if it was being spoken aloud.
So we drew 2 people talking and added the conversation that would happen at home. Then we looked at how it would look in a story.
We need to remember that speaking does happen in a vacuum. In other words the people are doing something, cooking dinner, playing on the PlayStation....
Each person who speaks what they say starts on a new line.
If only two people are speaking that the third or consecutive lines do not need the tag line 'said Mum.' only the first two need it.
very animated good on yous it seems like this kid is maybe playing roblox apex legends or might as well fortnite.
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ReplyDeletemrs mundy u done a mistake we can not fix it cause u are the author
ReplyDelete1.it seems like the boy is playing and looking at the wall i think hes playing wall games
2.why is this boy playing on an computer when u said playstation
Hi my name is Fred from St Patricks School. I like your poster about dialogue. It is funny because my name is Fred too.
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