We are getting ready to be part of Tuhi Mai Tuhi Atu.
We are trying to write positive, thoughtful and helpful comments. To us this means...
Start with a Greeting
Hi Mrs Mundy, I am Fred from Red Hill School.
Or you could use Kia ora, Talofa, Hello... and their name.
Tell them who you are.
Positive
I like the way you have included a picture with your story.
I can see you have done a lot of research and found interesting facts.
Tell them what you like about their post, what made it interesting for you.
Thoughtful
I learnt what the word habitat means.
I enjoyed reading your slide (or post) about elephants I didn't know they had toe nails.
Tell them something you learnt. Or shared something that relates to the post.
Helpful
Next time you might like to check your spelling.
Remember i needs to be a capital I when talking about yourself.
What did you learn.
Be kind, think about what you know or ask a question?
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Please remember to be helpful, thoughtful and encouraging.